The Theatre of History Episode 2: The SU-76
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Although I'm not writer myself or don't have any experience what so ever (on that field), I have small feedback here. I noticed that there was a small recycling of words at the end. Here is what I mean:
"Due to its small chassis, it was a very efficient assault gun in urban combat and was well-liked by the Soviet infantrymen."
"In the Soviet Army, the SU-76 was highly liked by both crews and infantrymen because of its simplicity, reliability, and ease of use."
I know that on the bottom there are different meanings but something I noticed.
Anyways, good stuff and waiting for the next vote!
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