Listen man, don't take any offense because I sincerely don't mean any, but you have to do something about your mouth noises. It's really annoying to hear sucking in air, smacking lips, etc.
With that said, the commentary is pretty good overall, far above a lot of other ones I've seen. I'd suggest pausing the video when there are multiple things happening across the field to showcase the unit match-ups.
You should probably consider bringing another commentator on so you can bounce observations and ideas off each other, although it's really hard to do so. I still remember a really awkward exchange betwen hans and aecoh on sex tourism in thailand during the factional showdown.
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